Saturday, May 3, 2008

reflection 7

On the unit 7 in critical literacy, I had learned how to produce and evaluate critical writing. The information’s that I found interesting is dieting. This article had been publishing by random house, pages 174-197. The article is been written Seligman, Martin (1994) chapter 12 Dieting: a waist is terrible things to mind. The article is about wide range of current issue regarding of weight control. The writer also wants the reader that, they must not easily trust the commercially product providers because sometime, they just want to take advantage for making business.

In this topic, our class had been form in to, 2 groups. For me the article a very longs and its very boring to read, even though the writer make the sub topic between paragraph and insert a several of table, still it’s boring to read. The tables also are very difficult to understand, because the font that the writer use is very small and the numbers are dim

To conclude, actually it is very good for the writer itself to use their self as an example, because they have the experience and they know how to overcome the problems itself. This article wants the readers to know that they must know how to be on diet in right way so that they will not get the bad consequences. This article also wants the readers to realize that not all dieting product gave good effect, they must realize that sometime the person who sold the diet product just want to take an advantage because they want gain profits.

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